Unicorn Square

News stand at Union and 15th, NYC, iphone pic by someone. Else?

News stand at Union and 15th, NYC, iphone pic by someone. Else?

In Alanon they said We

need to pray

and ask God

to grant Us

the ability to accept the things We

cannot change.

I’m

not doing

that good

accepting right now

and I

need to get to a meeting. Because here I sit

disgruntled over His

cancer. This cancer.

Thing that isn’t happening to Me.

Happening to Him…

…a thousand miles away,

almost to the mile.

So long He

been the muse’s

favorite

Sagittarius born

year of the horse

Brooklyn born

Italian.

Night Train; Broadway.

His

Heart lives

At Union and Fifteenth

There’s a news stand there,

A subway entrance,

“At night they spin poi,” he said.

We looked.

But we

never found him.

Maybe we did.

Maybe He

had found us?

And turned and went away.

The original is quite different. You can read it here. And please tell me what YOU think of my revisions.

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  1. #1 by C on January 12, 2010 - 2:51 am

    Where’s the unicorn(s) ?

  2. #2 by La La on January 12, 2010 - 3:14 am

    right. shrewd. then you see then? cool.

    anything else?

    Xo Mr “C”

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